I am writing a song called New Kid in Town. It is about a new kid in a new town with adjustment issues. I have 3 potential song ideas called New Kid in Town at this link:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=405294
They are New Kid in Town 1, 2 and 3.
The production and writing are very rough and only give a rough sense of the songs. Would you mind giving the 3 a listen and voting on your favourite or letting me know if they all suck.
Thanks- Your help is always appreciated!
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Doublestop
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Number one, definitely.
The pace of the delivery and the melody fit the lyrics well. Number two sounds a bit contrived and very much like a song from a stage musical whilst number three just sounds rather awkward because you have to deliver the lyrics so slowly to fit in with the melody.
I don't know what makes me qualified to comment though!
Nice lyrics by the way.
Doublestop
The pace of the delivery and the melody fit the lyrics well. Number two sounds a bit contrived and very much like a song from a stage musical whilst number three just sounds rather awkward because you have to deliver the lyrics so slowly to fit in with the melody.
I don't know what makes me qualified to comment though!
Nice lyrics by the way.
Doublestop