RAYZOON

Hi jorkke_

Thanks again for taking the time to reply back I appreciate your insight.

I'll keep the importance of the singer's delivery in mind when it comes time to take my songs to the next level.

James

Hi jorkke_

Sounding nice Simple, straight-forward. I am listening on headphones. On the verses, I can't always make out the lyrics....maybe piano a bit turned down or voice bumped up.

Thanks for sharing.

James

<r>Hi jorkke_<br/>
<br/>
Thanks for the listen and feedback especially on the "weak link" aspect.<br/>
<br/>
>his limitations as a singer become too obvious. <br/>
This is a great observation. I'd love to here you explain how or where he falls short and how those limitations come out...or maybe what ...

<t>http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8940325<br/>
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While the world is soft<br/>
Melting to puddles<br/>
In the shadow of a canvas<br/>
I do not<br/>
<br/>
Brush the fly off your face<br/>
You're out on a limb<br/>
You're dreaming again<br/>
I do not<br/>
<br/>
Chorus<br/>
'Cause I just can't ...